[Oslc-recon] Comments on Recon spec

[Tuan Dang]

>1) Please remove/update the red warning text in the front to be like how 
PerfMon and Auto used (not just removing red text).  It is very clear from 
previous version that this is >the first version, don't need to reiterate. 

>Namely:
>"NOTE: This version of the specification has version 2.0 to indicate that 
it is an OSLC Core 2.0 compliant specification. This specification is the 
initial version of an OSLC >Reconciliation specification." 

done. 

>2) #Introduction 
>The term "artifact" and other general terminology really don't help me 
know what this spec is about.  It would be helpful to include some 
specific samples/examples of how it >might: computers, IT resources, etc 

I've an example using ComputerSystem in the intro paragraph

>3) #Namespaces 1 
>Namespaces should be hyperlinked so one can click on it to see the actual 
vocabulary document. 

now hyperlinked to the crtv vocab page



Thanks ! T

Tuan Dang
Tivoli OSLC governance, OSLC Reconciliation workgroup lead, Tivoli Common 
Data Model
Internet: tdang at us.ibm.com
phone: (919) 224-1242 T/L 687-1242
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