[Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)

Wed Oct 17 04:28:29 EDT 2012

Hi all,

Thanks a lot for your comments. Somehow I didn't receive Wesley's
comments over the mailing list. I hope no other mail has been lost as
well.

Sean, can you please send me the OSLC logo in a higher resolution, as
well as the Lyo one?

I'll upload a new version with all your comments after adding the better
quality logos.

Best Regards,

Parham Vasaiely

Project Manager R&D

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From: Oslc-Communications
[mailto:oslc-communications-bounces at open-services.net] On Behalf Of Sean
Kennedy
Sent: Wednesday, October 17, 2012 1:28 AM
To: oslc-communications at open-services.net
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)

+1 for Wesley's nits

Sean Kennedy 

________________________________

OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web -- 
http://open-services.net/ <http://open-services.net/> 
Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- 
http://eclipse.org/lyo/ <http://eclipse.org/lyo/>  

There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. --
Victor Hugo

 Wesley Coelho ---2012/10/16 07:42:24 PM---Looking good! A few minor
nits to consider:

From: Wesley Coelho <wesley.coelho at tasktop.com>
To: Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM at IBMCA, 
oslc-communications at open-services.net, 
Date: 12/10/16 07:42 PM
Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)

________________________________

Looking good! 

A few minor nits to consider:

* Consider dropping the "..." ellipsis after "Linked Lifecycle Data" 
* Consider making Linked Lifecycle Data the same blue color as "the Next
Generation...". Not sure but it might even work to reverse the heading
and subheading, e.g.:

Linked Lifecycle Data:
The Next Generation of Collaboration

* The upper and lower case should be consistent in "Tool Integration and
Interoperability...". E.g. all title-cased or all lower case like a
sentence:

Tool integration and interoperability based on open and standard
Internet technologies

* Consider dropping the word "Different"
* Consider adding bullets for the last two points.
* Is the OSLC logo at the top left a vector graphic? A higher res image
or vector might make it look better, especially when printed.

Just my 2 cents.

+1 for of Sean's suggestions.

Wesley

--
Wesley Coelho
Director, Business Development
Tasktop Technologies
+1 778 588 6896 Ext. 112

From: Oslc-Communications [mailto:
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<mailto:oslc-communications-bounces at open-services.net> ] On Behalf Of
Sean Kennedy
Sent: October-16-12 6:47 AM
To: oslc-communications at open-services.net
<mailto:oslc-communications at open-services.net> 
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)

It looks a lot cleaner to me - very good.

A few thoughts: 
1. I think it would be better to put the whole Lyo logo (which includes
the OSLC logo) instead of just the lion's head.
2. Use bold instead of italics to bring focus to "OSLC Core" and "OSLC
domain workgroups".
3. I prefer lower case for URLs, i.e. open-services.net
<http://open-services.net/>  (but it doesn't bother me that much!) 

Sean Kennedy 

________________________________

OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web -- 
http://open-services.net/ <http://open-services.net/> 
Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- 
http://eclipse.org/lyo/ <http://eclipse.org/lyo/>  

There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. --
Victor Hugo

 "Vasaiely, Parham" ---2012/10/14 07:21:50 PM---Hi all,

From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <parham.vasaiely at eads.com
<mailto:parham.vasaiely at eads.com> >
To: Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM at IBMCA, <
oslc-communications at open-services.net
<mailto:oslc-communications at open-services.net> >, 
Date: 12/10/14 07:21 PM
Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)

________________________________

Hi all,

I've submitted an updated version based your feedback and Sean updates.
http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/
<http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/> 

Please send me your feedback by Wednesday 17th Oct. 2012. 

Best Regards,
Parham Vasaiely
Project Manager R&D
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EADS Innovation Works UK
Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering

From: Oslc-Communications [
mailto:oslc-communications-bounces at open-services.net
<mailto:oslc-communications-bounces at open-services.net> ] On Behalf Of
Sean Kennedy
Sent: Friday, October 05, 2012 2:08 PM
To: oslc-communications at open-services.net
<mailto:oslc-communications at open-services.net> 
Subject: Re: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris) 

Thanks for uploading to the wiki, I have made a few modifications that
you can find here:
http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/File:OSLC_Flyer1_A5-sk.docx
/
<http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/File:OSLC_Flyer1_A5-sk.doc
x/> 
(I also linked to this update from the wiki page)

Here are some other things I think we should try to work into the flyer:
1. Eclipse Lyo 1.0: that it speeds and simplifies your OSLC
implementations + what it provides
2. W3C LDP WG: that it is standardizing part of OSLC Core 

Sean Kennedy 

________________________________

OSLC: Lifecycle integration inspired by the web -- 
http://open-services.net/ <http://open-services.net/> 
Eclipse Lyo: Enabling tool integration with OSLC -- 
http://eclipse.org/lyo/ <http://eclipse.org/lyo/>  

There is nothing more powerful than an idea whose time has come. --
Victor Hugo

"Vasaiely, Parham" ---2012/10/05 04:35:39 AM---Hi,

From: "Vasaiely, Parham" <parham.vasaiely at eads.com
<mailto:parham.vasaiely at eads.com> >
To: "Robert W Myers" <rwmyers at us.ibm.com <mailto:rwmyers at us.ibm.com> >,
Sean Kennedy/Toronto/IBM at IBMCA, 
Cc: <oslc-communications at open-services.net
<mailto:oslc-communications at open-services.net> >, "Oslc-Communications"
<oslc-communications-bounces at open-services.net
<mailto:oslc-communications-bounces at open-services.net> >
Date: 12/10/05 04:35 AM
Subject: RE: [Oslc-communications] [oslc-communications] OSLC Flyer for
Innovate (London) and ARTEMIS Co-Summit (Paris)

________________________________

Hi,

Thanks for the feedback. Here the updated version.
http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/
<http://open-services.net/wiki/communications/OSLC-flyer/> 

If this is okay for a first version I'll release it for printing.

Best Regards,
Parham Vasaiely
Project Manager R&D
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Engineering & Architecture, Software and Systems Engineering

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